I Love Trees, and other disclaimers

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So I’m way behind (two months, in fact) on check-ins with the #WIPMarathon gang, and I haven’t just blogged to blog in donkey’s years (real time, a few months). I’ve been buried in my current manuscript, as well as summer travels, and a decision that seems increasingly weightier every time I peer at it. Sideways.

But now’s the time to sort that out. Summer’s always my busiest time of year since that’s when we tend to cram in all the trips. July was the most incredible (I mean that literally; I couldn’t believe how much I fit in) month, and I can tell you that easily because I recently invested in one of these:

http://www.passionplanner.com/

I had to order it from the States but it was well worth it. I like lists and organising and planning, and I’ve tried any number of diaries and planners over the past two decades (I was very fastidious with my planning back in high school, too!), but this one is TRUE LOVE.

I won’t go into all the reasons why — check it out for yourself — but suffice it to say it shows me at a glance how I’m doing this week, asks me questions, gives me encouraging quotes, and does it all in a neat, tidy, professional-looking package (without being sterile-looking).

Anyhow, back to July! When I answered my questions about how July went, how I felt about it, etc., I was BLOWN AWAY by how much I accomplished in the month! It’s my favourite month, I suppose rather egotistically because my birthday’s in it (even though these days, the idea of no longer being 25 freaks me right out), but also because it’s summer and reminds me of all the fun childhood summer adventures I had.

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This July, though. My husband and I played in TWO separate outdoor volleyball tournaments with our friendly club (the Horfield Hornets), Wick and Whitefield in the Bristol area. Between those two weekends, I went to Falmouth, Cornwall (where I attended uni) on a solo writing break for 4 nights, had the most glorious (distracting) weather, and edited about 50k words.

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The next free weekend, we went to the west coast of Wales for my birthday present (my husband is the most thoughtful guy ever), which was a day photography course with this guy:

http://www.andydavies.info/pages/workshops/skomer.html

We took a small boat to Skomer Island and I learned some new tips for using my DSLR to photograph wildlife, specifically, puffins (and how I love puffins… and taking photos of them; my patronus is a puffin). So that was magical.

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And in the midst of all of that, I finished 2 passes on my manuscript and got to host one of my dear uni friends for 2 weeks while she was doing a course nearby.

And all sorts of other things went down. I had my first (and I would love to say, last) MRI! I was forced to remove the belly button piercing I’ve had in since I was 22! (and put it back in immediately afterwards). I went bowling and beat my husband 179 to 177! (He wins at every game and sport ever ever ever). All KINDS of jolly japes!

We were in the VIP pit at Taylor Swift’s first ever concert in Scotland, in Glasgow, and she was adorable and sweet and entertaining as always (oops, that was June, but here’s a photo anyhow):

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Admiring her outfit as much as I was.

Needless to say, been a bit busy! But regarding…

WIP MARATHON!

I can’t really add my check-ins for June and July now, but I will say this. Trees. I love them. I wish Ents were real. Trees make this world marvellous, and I’m happiest when I’m in (or near) a forest. But I’ve gotta say, I’ve just learned the secret to editing (for me) is printing the manuscript.

That’s right. I’m on manuscript #4 and have never printed that bad boy off before, but I’ve done it now, three rounds on the current manuscript, and taken each to Staples for a cheap comb binding. And the number of invaluable changes I’ve made because I’ve seen it all on paper is beyond counting.

The proof!
The proof!

I try to utilise as much paper space as possible, so I set the page horizontally, make two columns, font size to 11, and single-spaced. Some people might say this’ll drive them cross-eyed, but it works for me. It looks (somewhat) like a real book, and that tricks my mind into seeing so much more than on the screen. Even my with massive Apple Thunderbolt screen.

I’ve read for years the tip about printing your MS and editing on paper, but until I actually did it, I sorely undervalued it. I did two drafts and two passes on Scrivener, received feedback from my crit partners, made those changes, all before printing off the first hard copy. It seems like a lot of work looking back, but I’m lip-bitingly optimistic that this has saved me a lot more work, given the endless revisions I did on previous manuscripts.

So, fellow WIPMarathoners, if I have any tip from the past two months to share, that’s it. If you’re like me and just smile and nod when people say that but have never actually tried it, I highly recommend giving it a shot once.

Of course, as with everything in the romantic and whimsical dreamscape that is the writer’s life (yeah, I know), what works for one doesn’t work for another. There is no secret recipe, but for me this has been a massive boost.

Until next time, enjoy the rest of your August!

The Scotsman and I had theme shirts this year. If you know these names, big-ass batch of brownie points to YOU. (Best ep ever).
The Scotsman and I had theme shirts this year. If you know these names, big-ass batch of brownie points to YOU. (Best ep ever).
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Final WIPMarathon Check-In

First, hats off to Ifeoma for running WIPMarathon!! I’m so grateful to have met you and this encouraging bunch of writers, and while I’m sad the marathon is over, I’m excited to keep up with everyone. I’m hopeful that when the next one comes along, I’ll be well into a WIP so I can actually share excerpts and feel more focused.

As I’ve spent most of the Marathon on revisions and playing with a WIP I wasn’t ready to commit to yet, I can’t comment on how much I accomplished in the way I’d like. But it’s been a huge help, regardless. I’ve now got dates and a plan written in permanent marker (you know I’m serious now) on my wall calendar for the plotting, drafting, and revising of my next MS. And the fun begins on Monday, so thank you for helping me focus on the possible 🙂

WIP Issues this week: To cut or not cut a beloved character, possibly saving him for another MS. Still undecided.

What I learnt this week in writing: Hyphens are a bit of a grey area. It seems like they’re often down to personal preference, but obviously that’s not how it should be. This little refresher from Grammarly helped me out with regards to compound modifiers.

What distracted me this week while writing: Got nothing done Friday-Monday due to a chest infection and a 3-day trip to London to see this beautiful, talented lady:

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Last 200 words: Revisions, as always. But instead I’ll throw in some gratuitous London shots from the weekend 🙂

I was SUPER EXCITED!
I was SUPER EXCITED!
Pocket Picard enjoyed his walk around Buckingham Palace.
Pocket Picard enjoyed his walk around Buckingham Palace.
View from the top of St. Paul's Cathedral
View from the top of St. Paul’s Cathedral

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Plans After WIPMarathon: By 14th February, I plan to have the WIP outlined, to begin drafting on 17th Feb. Wish me luck! 1 week to outline sounds pretty tight, but if I can get my head down and fight off the distractions, I CAN DO THIS!

Thanks again so much to all my fellow Marathon-ers! I’ll be keeping in touch on the #WIPMarathon hashtag, and look forward with great expectations toward the next one! Thanks so much for sharing all your inspiring progress 🙂

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